GAM 631 – 5.1 Self-Critique Part 2

For this character just anatomically it's incorrect.  You don't get the true since of the legs but they are suppose to be more like a Minotaur.  But the viewer can not see that.  Even though this is a made up creator the four arms are way to long.  The thumbs also seem to be really small and missed placed in comparison to the other fingers.  I think that even creatively there should be at least one regular length.  Also in this image there is no real since of weight for the character he is just there.  Looking at the image I'm not sure if the shoulders should be as small as they are.  I think that they should be larger forcing the pads to larger as well.  Also the straps look extremely thin to be attached to war armor.

 For this one the main thing that stands out is the head.  So making the head a bit bigger would help.  Also the right foot is smaller than the left.  The right four arm is a bit sorter but I'm not sure if it is because of the armor.  Also the thighs look like thy can be a little longer and a tad wider.

The left hand is too long, specifically the fingers.  The left foot need tot be flat to covey the weight of the character.  Right now it feels like she in on her toes.  The right ankle can be a bit thinner The foot slightly wider to show the right portions. Also shave a bit of the thighs.

The arms are, more so the shoulders a too small for the characters build.  The arm length also seems to bit short. the lower leg can be bigger.  Then left knee is going in the wrong direction and puts the character in a awkward position. 

The arms appear to be too short and need to be adjusted.